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It is true that the population of plant and animals is decreasing in many countries. There could be several reasons why this is happening, and I believe that technology and human activities are the main causes.

There are various reasons why

plants

and

animals

are decreasing in number.

Firstly

, deforestation has some critical effects on both

plants

and

animals

. As human-kind

constructs

more buildings and consumes more wood, the trend of deforestation has boomed in recent decades. As a consequence, the living areas of wild

animals

have shrunk and

this

has resulted in lowering the number of

animals

.

Secondly

, climate changes are a threat to both

animals

and

plants

.

For example

, global warming is the main reason for seasonal fires that happen in the North of Iran.

Finally

, hunting and capturing wild

animals

has a direct effect on their population. In my view, using green energies

instead

of fossil fuels could be practical in controlling global warming. Car companies had to engage new technologies and made the use of green energies like Solar energy be practical.

Moreover

, governments should set more severe laws against hunters and companies who cut the trees illegally. Unfortunately, in

third

world countries like Iran, there are many bands that trade the trees freely while it is against the laws.

Also

, public awareness should be increased through education, TV programs or celebrities' efforts. There are many figureheads like Bill Gates, who is trying to inform people about endangered

plants

and animal species. In conclusion, I believe that via some basic activities the population of both

animals

and

plants

could be controlled.

Test Type	Academic
Module	Writing
Task	Writing Task 2
Task Bands	8 Band